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Wednesday, October 12, 2016

Character Comparison #1

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Quincy Irving VS Quintus Nanami

Differences:

Quincy was raised in a military city-state were the only way to make a name for yourself was to get into a high ranking position or die serving your country.

Quitnus was raise on a planet that treated people with his specific “affinity” (being a bearer) like they were nothing more than housewives and baby makers.

Quincy was the youngest of five siblings, he was very quiet and tended to get ignored due to these factors. His parents did love him, they just neglected him by accident.

Quintus is an only child who was raised by his two parents who seemed to always be in his business. He couldn't get away with anything if he tried and his mother expected him to act how society expected of him rather than encouraging him to follow his dreams of joining Fleet (the inter-galactic army).

Quincy is half demon summoner and half elemental wolf demon. He has power of flames, shadows, and gains a boost on full moon while on the new moon he feels quite lethargic.

Quintus is a mutt, but has enough of his demon roots that he can safely say he's the next in line for both the Kingdom's Throne and is the next Lord To Be for his other grandparents' lands and villages they govern... Although he doesn't want these positions in the slightest.

Quincy joined the army at 11 through his school since the school he joined offered preparatory classes.

Quintus joins Fleet at the age of 18 when he says he's going to go find his mate to his parents and ends up just going through training instead.

Quincy has his heart broken way too many times because he becomes far too attached to his missions.

Quintus has never felt true heart break, but he is extremely wary of people far more than Quincy is despite suffering far less in the love realm.

Quincy falls in love with three people at the same time.

Quintus prefers respect over love, but will accept both equally.

Quincy can analyze a situation and is willing to let others take care of it/him to allow them them to feel better.

Quintus' temper may be long, but hurt someone he cares about and he will make sure you PAY for what you've done...


Similarities:

Quincy and Quintus both struggle with their identities.

Quintus and Quincy both need to feel love and respected before they start having massive character growth.

Both are considered strong leaders despite both being shy.

Both are shy and have a tendency to mess up their words when they try to flirt purposefully.

Both are Bisexual (which I learned from later experimentation with both).

Both have a thing for cooler colors, but adore pushy/bouncy personalities that remind them of an old friend who they have no idea what happened to them.

Love looks best on both.

Quintus and Quincy will do anything for the person they love.

Quincy and Quintus are stupidly protective.

These two both have black hair, red eyes, pale skin, slight fangs, and nails that grow like claws.

Both are heroes in their own rights and both are far too giving and deeply caring.


Conclusion:


These two characters are both very sweet and understanding and loving. Although they may have started as the same person they have evolved to be vastly different. I adore the both of them, but that doesn't mean I won't have fun forcing them into hard positions because every author knows how to properly torture their characters...

Tuesday, October 11, 2016

Character Short #4

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Quintus Short #2

Wings are smashed into a hard, cold marble wall, a small gasp leaving rosy pink lips, “h-HEY!” Ruby-red eyes are wide with fear as a clawed hand runs through black curls. A powerful heart pounds in the weakly struggling bearer's chest, his pale skin pink and hot. “Stop that! le-LET GO YOU JERK!” But the white haired male in front of him just towers over him with a smirk.

Electricity thunders down the smaller male's spine as the clawed hand brushes down his cheek, a disgusting whimper leaves his lips. The shock wasn't pleasant, far from it, rather it was his defense mechanism kicking in and reminding him to run. The shuddering through his body and sputtering heart telling him to fight, but he can't, he can't seem to get his brain to connect to anything else than his mouth.

“Heh,” Lips are pressed to the tip of his ear before sharp bite to the cartilage. Another shock, more pain. Then the other's voice whispers in his ear, making his head spin. “You said you were going to fill in for the bitch, right? You still sure about that, bearer?” Of course he looks up, red eyes boring into crystallized amber ones.

He manages a smirk, “In a moment I'll be kicking your ass.” Of course this is when the larger male, the giver, leans back. For a short moment confusion is mixing on his face before he just chuckles.

“Aw, cute.” And he lifts his hand for bringing it a crossed the pale boy's face, an almost snapping sound echos down the long hallway they're in, the many windows bleeding in a midday sunlight. The pain stings the bearer's cheek, but he just narrows his eyes. “You think you can fight back? Pathetic. Even your body knows to just give up.” And those cruel lips are on his own, silencing words and his body can't move and his heart is thundering and-

Crack!

The body pinning him to the wall is thrown to the side. The spell holding him still broken as the half Magi, half Dracori stumbles back. Turning his gaze to the side he sees a young man dressed in a modest suit, glaring coal gray eyes, and a ruler in hand, “Jiizen.” The giver's name has the male taking a step back, amber eyes huge in confusion. “That is more than enough.” The proper looking bearer pushes pale blonde bangs from his eyes.

“Uh, s-Sir! We, uh, I was just disciplining this wayward-”

“Shut up!” The giver falls silent and the proper bearer sighs, tapping the ruler to his cold face. “Hmm... Lets see, a proper punishment...? Ah, I know...” He smiles icily. “Jiizen you are hereby relieved of your duties.”

“sa... Sir?”

“I suggest going to pack, you have exactly one hour to leave the school or I will have to call in someone to remove you!”

The giver nods, “Yessir.” And turns to walk off, a dark glare shot the younger bearer's way. The elder bearer sighs once he's gone and turns to the young bearer with an almost emotionless expression.

“You're tardy again, Nanami.”

“Uh, r-right!” The black haired boy nods and goes to run off when his arm is caught. Turning he sees coal colored eyes looking worried. “Watcher, sir?” And then he's released after a few tense breaths.

The blonde male sighs and walks past Nanami, “Quintus was it?” The boy nods. “Good job at protecting your fellow bearer... If Josie hadn't come to me I fear your spirit would of finally been broken, child... I'm taking you to the Nurse... He'll watch over you along with Josie until we're certain Jiizen has left the grounds. Come along now.”

Nodding slowly the younger bearer follows in slight confusion. Watcher Fell hardly ever is kind to the students, let alone someone who is as far from the school's teachings as he is. Yet here he is showing a shred of kindness and compassion. Quintus Nanami was quite impressed to be honest, despite his slightly gaping mouth as he follows behind Watcher Fell still wary of the idea of being whacked himself with the Watcher's trusty ruler.

But the two walk on in silence, neither speaking now that the coast seems clear. As they arrive at the Medical Wing Nanami sees a handful of advanced first years assisting the Nurse, but he's swept in past them to be placed in a back room with only one other person sitting in it on the only available bed. Blue curly hair and green eyes running over with tears, snot pouring from a cutely freckled nose, this is Josie Jemper. Josie is one of Quintus' classmates and the only dorm room member who doesn't act like he's the plague just because he doesn't wish to follow every rule placed before them.

Josie is a gentle child, their soft like although metallic wings ruffle the blankets him when he looks up. Seeing Nanami he leaps to his feet, “You're safe!” And barrels into him, quite unbearer like. But Quintus is like no other bearer in this school. Instead of freaking out or falling over he holds his ground and wraps his arms with care around Josie. Being almost a head taller than the other makes for laying his chin upon their head rather easy. Josie blubbers and rubs snot all over the front of him, the black haired bearer not minding at all. Quintus holds still save for the gentle rubbing of the other's back between his wings, much akin to how his own bearer used to treat him when he was small and before his parents had sent him off to this Goddesses Forsaken place.

“I told you I would be,” Quintus says softly when the blubbering dies down a little. “I don't break my promises, Josie, you know that.” He tilts his head and places his cheek onto the smaller bearer's head, sighing to himself. Many nights he found the blunette up and sniveling in his own, lonely bed having awoken from nightmares. At the time he didn't know what they were about, but looking back now he should of know that someone was abusing Josie, someone was taking advantage of his kindness and gentle heart.

Watcher Fell sighs then and Josie jumps, smacking his head into Quintus' and both whimper a little. Bearers still are the frailer of the two sexes after all. And male bearers even more so than females who have strong immune systems that only fall short of female givers. The two bearers pause. Then they look at one another. Shortly they're giggling. Watcher Fell sighs again before placing his hands onto both of the boy's heads, “Take care of each other... Givers may be strong, but even they can be knocked down a peg or two. But only... If we work together... Posed, purposeful, perfection, but never pretty headed. And never, ever someones bitch. We are prizes to be won only by those who are worthy, not those that blunder and bash their ways through the ranks. We are not prizes for the brainless. We are prizes for the gentle and the kind and the intelligent. Never fall short. Never let the other teachers break the you behind the mask...” And with that he pulls his hands away. “Now I must go speak with the Headmasters... Stay here until I come to get you...”

He heads for the door, modest suit being adjusted as he walks. He stops just outside the door, “And Nanami?”

Quintus looks up, his red eyes wide with worry. “ye-Yessir?” The blond slowly brakes into a smile.

“I expect a full report on my desk by lights out today. Do not leave out any details,” And he sweeps off while Nanami huffs to himself. Josie just smiles and pulls him to the bed where parchment, quill, and ink wait for him. Sighing Quintus starts his report, beginning from the first time he encountered Josie crying and moving forward from there.

This was going to be a long one.

And Quintus Nanami HATES having to use proper calligraphy...

Monday, October 10, 2016

Poems #1

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Societies Innocence

Red, red, red like roses
Our hearts beat like a drum
Bodies set into poses
Whispers saying you're numb

Lost comprehension of lies
As souls cripples things they do
We've turned into what dies
Only they know the how to

Breaking with apprehension
Watch as love and hate mix
This isn't a form of ascension
Over time we learn the tricks

Red, red, red we bleed
Saws and axes aren't toys
No warnings to heed
This is reality's twisted joys

People scream monster, monster
But they don't know who they are
Inside is a monster, monster
Each second raising the blame bar

No one can accept anyone
At some point we “grew up”
No longer do we play, have fun
No we didn't grow up

We rotted inside our hallow cores
We died the moment we tried to speak
Always denied as children the “more”
Its society that turned itself weak

Death, decay, endless sadness
This is the life we live
Its enough to drive anyone to madness
Nothing left in us to give

Fragments of a cracked mirror
We seem like spoiled kids
But its not that, not even near
Its the what the parents wanted rid

We are a powerful foe
If only we felt safe enough to speak
We break each other like pros
Shattering is what we reap

Sunday, October 9, 2016

A Character Short #3

Author's Note/WARNING: This is meant to only be a glance into at character's perspective, not meant to be an extended scene. This scene is meant to build a relationship, though brief, between character and reader. Also please note that as the Author I do not always agree with what my characters feel/think/do, they are not a manifestation nor extension of my wants rather they are practically their own people with their own opinions. If something my character says or does bothers you please remember it does NOT reflect me as a person. Thank you and have a nice day.

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BLUE, GREEN, YELLOW, AND RED
Nyami and Makoto


Aquamarine eyes roll as green-blue moth wings fold back against a taunt and somewhat muscular back, the blue-green eyes meet jade colored ones with a roll. “Yo. Ny?” A sigh is given from pretty, thin lips and a freckled nose wrinkles. A crumbling sound echoes in large, pointed ears as red brown hair is pushed away from curious yellow-green eyes. “You don't regret it, do you?”

A pregnant pause follows before slightly plumb, and bruised from playful nips, lips press into thin pink ones. They linger together for a long moment where they just revel in the feeling of being so close after their earlier union. Then those soft lips press along the fairer one's jawline to his neck and down to his shoulder. Jade eyes stare up into blue-green ones, “Yeah. No worries, Mako.” And then the auburn buries their face into their shoulder. “I already told you. I don't do regrets.” Strong hands thread their way into red-brown locks and pet the loving one. Light blue dragonfly wings flutter lightly, the veins pulsing in the cover of the night.

“Thank you,” The fair one rolls onto their back, wings pressing in a comforting way behind them, the beating from them claiming them. Green glows mutely and is almost drowned out by the happy pulsing light blue in the room. “We should get some sleep though... Exams in the morning.”

“Uuuugh,” Ny groans from their moved position next to their partner, wings pressing into the bed as presses the back of his hand to his forehead head. “Don't remind meeeeee!” He huffs in the small cabin's light. Summer Camp was the worst, but it didn't help that this was a preliminary military test for all Units of age. “Its gonna suuuuuck!” With a moan he buries his face into the only pillow.

The greener one just gives a smirk, “What? Not ready to punch the shit outta people?” He watches as the red one lifts up his face with a disgusted look. Blue-green eyes roll as the smirk falls into an annoyed frown. “C'mon, Nyami. If you don't give it your all your Unit will suffer for it... I want you to fight tomorrow, ya hear?” Not that the green haired one was gonna do the same for his own team, he was a last resort member after all.

Nyami sighs, “Yeah, yeah. Sure thing Makoto.” He waves his hand dismissively as he closes his eyes and lays his head down to rest. “Good night then.” The disgusted look melts away as the red head shifts closer to the green haired one, their bare shoulders pressing into one another.


Blue eyes sing in silence as the sixteen-year-old faerie feels warmth spread through his body. “Heh. Fine,” A small, loving smile spreads a crossed a slightly flushed pale face. “You win. Ashonu*. Sleep well, Nyami.”

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* "Ashounu" (Pronounced: Ah-sh-O-nn-oo / Ah-show-new): "I love you"

Saturday, October 8, 2016

A Character Short #2

Author's Note/WARNING: This is meant to only be a glance into at character's perspective, not meant to be an extended scene. This scene is meant to build a relationship, though brief, between character and reader. Also please note that as the Author I do not always agree with what my characters feel/think/do, they are not a manifestation nor extension of my wants rather they are practically their own people with their own opinions. If something my character says or does bothers you please remember it does NOT reflect me as a person. Thank you and have a nice day.

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William and Xaine

The bed is warm beneath the two bodies as smoke fills the air, a large stream coming from pale pink lips below a set of half lidded liquid-gold eyes. The other is much smaller and is head out in a sharp looking, pale hand with black claw-like nails extending the cig out to another. A slightly tan hand with nails that have obviously been chew recently takes the offered item. Tan fingers lift the burning stick to their pink lips and inhale a little bit, stormy eyes narrow and then they hand the cig back with a disgusted exhale.

The golden eyed one grins a sharp, toothy grin, “Pansy.” But shifts around to pull the other onto their black and red clad body, a brown covered head burying face first into my chest. Holding the other, smaller person close and shaking raven colored bangs from gold eyes. “You know you didn't have to try.” After a moment stormy blue-gray eyes look up at golden ones.

“Oh shove off ya scaled heat lamp,” Lips have pulled into a playful grin. “You would've eventually had pestered me 'nough... You're a baaaad influence like that.” And then they, he, is leaning up to place a small kiss to pale lips. A rumble dances through the raven's chest, the room warming a little and the brown haired one pulls back with a small frown. “Hey there heat lamp, I'm not dinner so lets not grill me, mmkay?” More playful grins.

Golden eyes glimmer for a moment before crushing the cigarette in their hand, putting it out, “You cheeky little monkey.” He disposes of the dead and used cig into an ash tray on the the bedside table before pulling the other male fulling on top of him. Stormy eyes dance with challenge and playfulness for a moment before their worlds spin a little and the black haired one is rest above the other. Gold pierces into storms and then lips meet, both making sounds of appreciation. They kiss for a short bit before the larger of the two pulls away and leans back onto his knees. “Sadly though we both have work brat... So up with us.” Rolling off he lands on his feet, his powerful body stretching before he wanders off to leave the brown haired one to sigh to himself.

“Mmmhhhmm, I know we have work,” He mumbles to himself. After a moment he hears the shower come on and he gets up to gather his own clothes. “All well, I can tell Xaine happy birthday after work...

Thursday, October 6, 2016

Re:Union Profile # 8

Name: Daisian Dredd

Age: 34

Race: Vampire and Shavaarift – Main shifts are large and aggressive

Gender: Female - Bearer

Personality: Rough, tough, classes head with sexiests (ie. Gamma who keeps her around to keep him on his toes... not to mention she's one of the best shots around), and short tempered. Daisian doesn't like people looking down on her and will do anything to make someone see her true, bad ass nature.

Flaws: Too hot headed at times, doesn't know how to chill.

Description: Dark skinned bad ass chick with her hair cut into short, soft, and dark curls. Her orange eyes suit her and her fangs are normally out due to her temper. She likes wear tight and close cut clothes including in how she stylizes her own uniform. She has some cool forms she can take.

History: Daisian was raised in a family where her and her bearer are the only bearers, everyone else is a giver so she's taken it upon herself to prove herself where ever she goes. That's why she's joined Fleet and she's been pair up with Gamma to help tame both of their inner evils (well, her more outter).

Goal/Drive: To prove herself, to kick anyone who tries to treat her like less's ass.

Powers/Abilities: The morphing ability complete with the deadly instincts to match.

Other: Is one of the top marksmen and sharp shooters of her age and in Fleet currently.

Tuesday, October 4, 2016

A Character Short #1


Author's Note/WARNING: This is meant to only be a glance into at character's perspective, not meant to be an extended scene. This scene is meant to build a relationship, though brief, between character and reader. Also please note that as the Author I do not always agree with what my characters feel/think/do, they are not a manifestation nor extention of my wants rather they are practically their own people with their own opinions. If something my character says or does bothers you please remember it does NOT reflect me as a person. Thank you and have a nice day.


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Quintus Short #1


The hot summer, sun burns at pale skin and crimson eyes squint in the harsh light. Despite being mostly species from a planet shrouded in darkness, the young dark haired boy isn't too put off from the bright sun. Actually since he grew up on a planet that has a day and night cycle he seems to get around just fine even in hot summer weather. His small, triangular ebony horns peeking out from his tufts of raven making the hair around it almost look like dark charcoal beside them.

The boy smiles to himself as he walks down a busy, small city street, his wings out for a stretch since returning home from vacationing with his mother's parents. His grandparents are rather strict, even more so than his are, but that doesn't mean that either place is at all relaxing. And, well, maybe saying his parents are strict is putting it wrong. Its not that his parents are too harsh its that his mother is far too demanding in this day and age.

A tiny ache from his wings makes he frown his thoughts. Because his mother had been raised by his grandparents and he's more than glad his mom is his mom and not his grandmother. Honestly that woman couldn't seem to settle for any form of middle ground. It was always “you're not bearer like” or “skirts aren't meant to be bunched up, be more dignified”. Honestly that was it mostly “be more dignified”, her favorite sentence. Which, thinking on it, actually makes his mother's “Quintus, you're supposed to be a bearer, honestly, act like one”seem almost like a childish whine in comparison. 

Speaking of his mother, his phone vibrates in his pocket letting out a high pitched shrieking sound as it does. Wincing a little he pulls the device out and sighs. Sadly its actually his mother so he answers it with a gentle and polite smile as the camera picks him up, the video call starting.

“Quintus Nanami! Where are you?” His mother sounds cross, her eyes boring holes into her son a crossed the video chat. “You were supposed to be home an hour ago to get ready! The Sinclairs are here already and their son only has a short time to visit you know!”

Of course the first thing out of his mother's mouth was about guests and impressions and other such things he would rather not bother himself with. Looking at his work out sweats slung almost low on his hips and his somewhat clinging from wetness tank, he shrugs, “Hey. He's an athlete, right? Betcha he'll totally dig the just got in from a run look.” Of course at the glare he receives he sighs. “I'll head home now and come in through the ba-”

“Good,” His mother snaps at him, her own red eyes almost hurt despite the fact she cut off her son. “Hurry up. You're far too late as it is!” And with that she hangs up leaving Quintus with a thick silence that he only breaks after a few seconds with a sigh.

“Love you too, Mother. Bye...” His sarcasm is nearing bland, but he turns and runs home. Best not to make his mother anymore upset with him than she already is...

Monday, October 3, 2016

Twenty Minutes Writing Challenge

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Prince and His Knight

“I'm sorry, but...” A sigh comes from rose pink lips, a pale hand reaches out towards a dark arm only to pull back. Another sigh. Amber eyes glance back to watch rosy lips. “You know this isn't right, we can't keep doing things like this.”

A dark lip is bitten, teeth dragging a crossed the sensitive skin and scraping it clean of anything dried there. Amber eyes drift off to the side and pale blue almost white hair flutters into them as their head is turned. After a short pause the dark skinned one speaks, it's soft and gentle, “I understand. But I... I am just worried about you...” 

Blood red hair is pushed away from a pale face, pink eyes narrowed in frustration, “I know, I know. Which is all the more reason to stop. The Guard needs you in top form and you can't be if your mind is always on me.” Amber eyes turn a hurt glare onto pink ones before drifting away again, dark arms cross in front of a strong chest. “This is unfair, we both know this, but as your best friend, I'm asking you to put the people before me. Just this once. Please?”

Another pause. A small, forceful huff of air.

“Fine! I will win this war,” Bluish hair is roughly pulled back into a pony-tail like form and tied back with leather. They sweep off like a shadow in the night to the other side of the room and gather up their armor. “But do not expect me to treat you any differently, not even on the battlefield.”

Pink lips have pulled into a frown, “You are so stubborn, My Prince... But fine. I Castra, your faithful servant, shall be ready to defend you til my last breath.” Castra can see the prince's shoulders tense. “And don't think I'm going to listen if you order me otherwise Allidor...”

Sunday, October 2, 2016

Re:Union Profile #7

[Re:Union - Character Profile - T]

Name: Westle

Age: 27

Race: Metrian and Vampire

Gender: Male-bearer

Personality: Fast thinker, makes snap decisions, works well with machines. Short temper and easily annoyed with idle chit-chat. Is an action sort of man.

Flaws: Doesn't mesh well with people

Description: Short, stocky, red hair and gray eyes.

History: Westle has worked on the Re:Union for seven long years, but in a rash action he dies in the first act. He's known as a hero to the crew after that.

Goal/Drive: To “not pussy foot around” things

Powers/Abilities: Like all vampires he drinks blood, fast thoughts.

Other: Ex-Mechanic on the Re:Union

Saturday, October 1, 2016

Re:Union Profile #6

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Name: Andrew Samuel Kendrick

Age: 35

Race: Automynth and Seraphene

Gender: Male-giver

Personality: Comes off cold and a hard ass, but he's just trying to do what's best for is patient. Andrew is a healer, not a fighter although he has scraped from time to time. Despite his conflicting sides to his nature isn't that abnormal due to his race and their sometimes lack of understanding emotions on more than a chemical level, although he can pick up on emotions none the less.

Flaws: Harsh and critical, he's stubborn to boot.

Description: Andrew looks pretty human although he has his quirks such as his veins glow in the dark as do his eyes. He also talks in an almost robotic way and his face typically is blank. He has blue hair and green eyes. Andrew is the average height for a male-giver.

History: Andrew doesn't share his history much, but he feels close to the only other long time resident Automynth on the Re:Union Denzel “Data” Helmen

Goal/Drive: To fix what is broken and to heal the wounded

Powers/Abilities: syncs up with his medical devices and has slight emphatic abilities

Other: When Andrew is happy his whole face changes and he lights up almost like a Christmas tree